I've made the changes you requested. I can make the background clearer still but I think it would draw too much attention from the lettering. It also defeats the purpose (and contrasts heavily) if the rest of the title screen is black. Finally, you may want more of the edge to be black, as it drops pretty shaply now. That said, I'm happy to send you the Photoshop file so you can tweak it to your heart's content. It has about 7 layers.